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She Played Comatose While Her Brother-in-Law Stole the Gold — His Face When She Sat Up Was Priceless — Part 2 of 3
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The Deed Box That Held More Than Paper
Two hours later, the study was quiet again. The police had taken Ronald to the station, and Danny was asleep in the guest room, clutching the deed box like a lifeline.
But I couldn't sleep. Something about Ronald's smirk gnawed at me.
I opened the deed box with trembling hands. Inside, beneath the trust documents, lay a folded letter — yellowed with age, addressed to my late father.
My breath caught as I read it. It was a confession, written by Ronald's own father, admitting that he had switched the original birth certificates of my father and Ronald's mother — making Ronald a distant heir to a fortune that was never his.
But the letter was just the beginning.
Beneath it, a faded photograph: my father and Ronald's mother, young and laughing, standing in front of this very estate. On the back, in my father's handwriting: "The truth dies with me, unless she finds it."
She. Me.
I was never supposed to be in a coma. The accident that put me here — a hit-and-run on the coastal road — wasn't an accident. The driver was never found.
Now I knew who had hired him.
I picked up the phone and called the detective. "Check Ronald's financial records," I said, my voice steady. "Look for a payment to a man named Vincent Marlow."
The detective was silent for a long moment. "We already found it," he said. "But there's something else. Ronald was working with someone inside the estate."
My blood ran cold. "Who?"
"Your head of security, Marcus."
The room spun. Marcus had been with the family for fifteen years. He had been the one to find me after the accident.
I hung up and stared at the phone. Then I heard a soft creak from the hallway.
Danny stood there, his face pale, holding a second piece of paper. "Aunt Claire?" he whispered. "I found this taped under the bed. It's from Uncle Ronald."
I took the paper. It was a map of the estate, with a red X marked on the old boathouse. And a note: "The real treasure is buried there. But you'll never live to spend it."
I looked at Danny. "Stay here," I said. "Lock the door. Don't open it for anyone."
"But Aunt Claire—"
"I'll be fine." I kissed his forehead. "I've been waiting for this moment."
I slipped out the back door, the cold night air hitting my face. The boathouse loomed in the distance, dark and silent.
But as I approached, I saw a light flicker inside.
And a silhouette — tall, broad-shouldered, holding a shovel.
Marcus.
I ducked behind a bush, my heart pounding. He was digging near the boathouse wall, muttering to himself. "She'll never find it," he said. "No one will."
Then he turned, and his eyes met mine.
"Claire." He smiled, and it was pure venom. "You're awake after all."
I stepped out of the shadows. "You were in on it from the start."
"Ronald promised me a cut." He shrugged. "But now he's gone, so I'll take the full treasure."
He raised the shovel.
"I'm sorry," he said. "But you're not leaving this boathouse alive."
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